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This Feeling
Contributed by
spaceotter
on
Sunday, 18th August 2002 @ 07:29:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The feeling that you leave in me is pure.
It surpasses any untouched wilderness,
Any purified substance.
It leaves me...
Clean.
Cleaner than the water of mountain springs,
Cleaner than the air that caress their peaks.
It lays in me...
Joy.
More powerful than an autumn storm,
Subtle as a springtime shower.
It provides me...
Comfort.
Like pillowy, sun-filled clouds,
The warmth of an electric blanket.
And sustains in me...
Love.
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2002-08-18 07:29:52] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: This Feeling
(User Rating: 1 ) by outsider on
Monday, 19th August 2002 @ 10:12:53 AM AEST (User
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Nice, I like this :)) |
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