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markymark
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Sunday, 18th August 2002 @ 07:28:48 AM in AEST
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InspirationalPoems
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in a world where no one knows you
i want to make you proud
i yearn for recognition
to stand out from the crowd...
in a land thats full of strangers
in a place thats full of pain
i long to make you happy
to see you smile again...
in a city full of caution
wary of who's who
i know that we can make it
but its got to be as two...
in a town thats not forgiving
where trust is hard to earn
where recklessness is frowned upon
i know that we can learn...
in a street, thats oh so quiet
where no one speaks at all
where neighbours would ignore you
if they heard your dying call...
to a house thats always happy
filled with laughter, free to roam
where love is always welcomed
to this place that i call home...
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Re: Home...
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 18th August 2002 @ 07:36:23 AM AEST
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Great write, Mark..
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Re: Home...
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by The_Phantom on
Sunday, 18th August 2002 @ 07:51:05 AM AEST
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I like it, very well put.
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Re: Home...
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by Chrissie on
Sunday, 18th August 2002 @ 11:11:08 PM AEST
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Excellent again Mark...it flows beautifully and I like the subject matter.
Love Chrissie x |
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Re: Home...
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by Lia on
Friday, 30th August 2002 @ 12:08:17 AM AEST
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"in a world where no one knows you"...I know that place!! Have been there a few times in my life. "where neighbours would ignore you
if they heard your dying call..." and sadly I have been here too. So I really understand this poem.. |
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