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The Day You Died
Contributed by
Desi
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Thursday, 2nd October 2003 @ 02:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
didactic
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On the day you died, my heart wept, but my eyes were dry.
On the day you died, the earth cried for you,
It cried tears of rain, hail and snow.
On the day you died, your family cried, even though they were the reason you commited suicide.
On the day you died, your friends cried, they yelled, screamed and fought.
On the day you died, everyone was sad.
But the day you died, was the best day you'd ever had.
Copyright ©
Desi
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2003-10-02 02:45:00]
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Re: The Day You Died
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by EmSal on
Thursday, 2nd October 2003 @ 06:33:14 AM AEST
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Oh how sad!!! It's so true though. I feel this poem. All the best.
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Re: The Day You Died
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 2nd October 2003 @ 07:10:17 AM AEST
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This is so sad..nicely written tho.
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