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This Night
Contributed by
crow
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Thursday, 2nd October 2003 @ 02:25:00 AM in AEST
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Majistic night, littered with stars,
paint a picture,
wishes from hearts.
To close my eyes, hear all
in moments, there in the suttle night wind.
A voice carried so far, so faint,
be well my friend, I dance this night
to honor whats shared.
The heavens wink back..............Crow
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2003-10-02 02:25:00]
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Re: This Night
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by LovingWhispers on
Thursday, 2nd October 2003 @ 02:53:17 AM AEST
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| Beautiful as always.... |
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Re: This Night
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 2nd October 2003 @ 03:08:39 AM AEST
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| True artistry with your words....Awesome! |
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Re: This Night
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by Ilhar on
Thursday, 2nd October 2003 @ 05:03:51 AM AEST
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magical
Shari |
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Re: This Night
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 2nd October 2003 @ 11:55:41 AM AEST
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| I messed it up a little, you my friends are so kind to overlook this. thank you all. |
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Re: This Night
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by jaeann on
Thursday, 2nd October 2003 @ 01:01:43 PM AEST
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| the heavens wink back..... :) |
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Re: This Night
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by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 2nd October 2003 @ 01:07:18 PM AEST
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All poets make mistakes Crow....
That's why we just overlook them and go!
Especially when they are great writes like yours.
The night winks back and so do I.....What a wonderful gift you have and that's not lie.
lovingcritters
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Re: This Night
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by Merry on
Thursday, 2nd October 2003 @ 03:41:42 PM AEST
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such a pretty thought -and it's the thought that counts
un beso
merry |
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Re: This Night
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by DreamWeaver on
Thursday, 2nd October 2003 @ 03:58:05 PM AEST
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| This poem is so lovely ... I love the last line especially ... Jan |
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Re: This Night
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by shelby on
Thursday, 2nd October 2003 @ 04:35:39 PM AEST
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a true artisit Crow your amazing
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Re: This Night
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 3rd October 2003 @ 11:52:28 AM AEST
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Though a short poem,the words ring longingly in my ears. It is lovely imagery,when in one moment you can see the heavens wink! 0:-) (Typo?what typo) :::wink:::
Angel always...godspeed...joni |
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