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Spirit Of Heart

Contributed by jaeann on Thursday, 2nd October 2003 @ 12:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



I walked into your room today.
It was morning cool, bright.... fresh.
I sat down
wrapping my thought and memories,
feeling of a lifetime
warmly in your blanket.
Slowly rocking.... the birds singing,
keeping rhythm
with the creaking of your chair.
My chest rises with yours as I hold you
closer to me than all the times before.
I feel as one.
I look at you,
your eyes....
God, you are so beautiful!
What an awesome gift to behold.....
your eyes melt into mine
as we both smile.
My daughter.
My precious one....
My darling angel.
I'll love you
for many lifetimes
past and future
but ahhh, this present
'tis so very sweet.
I held you in your room today.
Sang your little song
and cried....
As I realized
a flaw in the perfection of
my minds eye.....
I couldn't remember how you smelled.
The essence of you...
I can feel your presence.
I can hear your voice.
I can see your sparkle.
But, there's no you.
To meet again,
if ever so brief....
To hold you.
To feel you.
Look at you.
Hear you laugh.
Smell your hair
one more time.
Someday
I'll feel as if it were just
a simple moment in time....
Someday....
One day.....
Yes....
My little girl, yes.
I spent time with you
in your room today.




Copyright © jaeann ... [ 2003-10-02 00:05:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Spirit Of Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Thursday, 2nd October 2003 @ 12:27:51 AM AEST
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this was so very touching..brought tears to my eyes
Shari


Re: Spirit Of Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by LovingWhispers on Thursday, 2nd October 2003 @ 12:28:56 AM AEST
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I just cannot tell you how touching this is..but I too spent time with your daughter..here..through this beautiful write.
My arms are open,my breath is stilled.(((hugs)))


Re: Spirit Of Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 2nd October 2003 @ 03:11:17 AM AEST
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So very moving and loving. Your daughter is very lucky to have this loving of a mother in her life. Beautiful poem!


Re: Spirit Of Heart (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 2nd October 2003 @ 12:47:38 PM AEST
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I can`t express the emotion this brings out,
the work has done its job, good write Crow


Re: Spirit Of Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Thursday, 2nd October 2003 @ 04:03:40 PM AEST
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Oh god I cried when I read this ... at first believing it was a sweet write and imagining holding my own daughter this way ... and then, realising your pain and loss ... you wrote this with so much expression of sorrow, a truly beautiful write ... my heart goes out to you ... Jan




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