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Keeping It Simple
Contributed by
symptom_recital
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Wednesday, 1st October 2003 @ 11:05:00 PM in AEST
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'Let's keep it simple', that's what you said.
'It's easier that way, no one gets hurt.'
'Fine', I said. 'That's what I want too'.
It was what I wanted, until I fell for you.
As we lay there in your bed for the very first time,
Your purpose was simple, to take him off my mind.
You were a distraction, a way to ease the pain.
Then I made the mistake of seeing you again.
And again.
And the more I saw you, the more we talked,
The more you appeared in my dreams and my thoughts.
I know i'm in trouble, i've been here before.
I can't have you, it makes me want you more.
But you don't want me, you only want 'fun'.
You've been hurt too many times for all that serious stuff.
You tell me you like me and think about me sometimes,
But it's not enough to make you change your mind.
It's not love, to call it that would be untrue,
I just miss the way I feel when i'm with you.
In your room I escape from the world.
You intrigue me, complete me, I wish I was your girl.
And maybe when i'm lonely i'll give you a call,
Arrange some 'fun' for the night and recall
The good times we had without all that serious stuff
'Let's keep it simple'.......it's easy enough.
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Re: Keeping It Simple
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 1st October 2003 @ 11:09:21 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC... Lovely write...a bit sad I think, but well said... I can identify with this..
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Re: Keeping It Simple
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by jaeann on
Wednesday, 1st October 2003 @ 11:30:54 PM AEST
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welcome welcome welcome!!!!!
great write....great start!!! i've been there before!!!! |
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Re: Keeping It Simple
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by LovingWhispers on
Wednesday, 1st October 2003 @ 11:39:24 PM AEST
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| You will be happy here :)Honest writes..I love them. |
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Re: Keeping It Simple
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by EmSal on
Thursday, 2nd October 2003 @ 06:48:33 AM AEST
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Hey beautiful write...but yes sad!!! I feel this poem, excellently expressed...doesn't need any negative comments :) .
And yes I also welcome you to YPDC...
Thanks for sharing.
Emma. |
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Re: Keeping It Simple
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Thursday, 2nd October 2003 @ 09:48:10 AM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC... this was a very good write... looking forward to more!!
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Re: Keeping It Simple
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by Stitch on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 10:15:12 AM AEST
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Ouch. I could feel all the pain oozing from these lines. Is it really possible to engage in such a situation without entangling the heart?
I doubt it.
Stitch |
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