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i dont want to watch you leave
Contributed by
loopylou
on
Wednesday, 1st October 2003 @ 09:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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im scarred to feel so happy
i know its gonna go wrong
this happy feeling cant last long
scarred of losing you
analysing everything you do
your so important
i love you so much
when this ends ill be crushed
what do i do?
howd i stop losing you?
but i wont let you go
i love you
i thought id let you know
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loopylou
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2003-10-01 21:25:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: i dont want to watch you leave
(User Rating: 1 ) by EmSal on
Thursday, 2nd October 2003 @ 06:54:16 AM AEST (User
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Awww your spelling wasn't too bad...was a great effort. I thought this poem was touching and lovely...you let them know how you feel!!!! All the best.
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