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Defying My Own Gravity
Contributed by
HelixGreg
on
Wednesday, 1st October 2003 @ 03:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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The creation of greed is stifled
Exempting all who approach in glee
Happiness and sorrow are stapled
They stare for so long but they don’t see
A quarter of my being is daft
The other is trying to release
The next follows its own fearful path
The last is brilliant and a tease
All come forward now, like a magnet
Huge crowds search for the finish line
Seizing to vomit their tears in a set
I try to help everyone but its just mine
I can’t approach myself to understand
Letting in my breath is harder to do
The thoughts sift through my hand like sand
When all I try to present is the truth, true?
Copyright ©
HelixGreg
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2003-10-01 15:45:00]
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Re: Defying My Own Gravity
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by Saira on
Wednesday, 1st October 2003 @ 05:27:47 PM AEST
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"Happiness and sorrow are stapled
They stare for so long but they don’t see"
Loved these lines. Very ingenious write! Well done!
Saira |
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Re: Defying My Own Gravity
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by sicknivesevered on
Wednesday, 1st October 2003 @ 05:29:55 PM AEST
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| Aye. Excellent work. |
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Re: Defying My Own Gravity
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Wednesday, 1st October 2003 @ 08:34:45 PM AEST
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| I'll have to agree with Saira- those two lines rocked! Awesome job. |
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