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Serenity Inside Me
Contributed by
HelixGreg
on
Wednesday, 1st October 2003 @ 03:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Sensuously my serenity
Pulls from deep inside me
Everafter, from here on in
Bequeath this, my unholy sin
My love for the aesthetical
The dearly imperfect toll
Beauty and cesspool of intangible
Brewing anger and sadness ample
Explicit ominous feral rage
Locked in this endless cage
Is my serenity all gone?
To God I’m like a pawn
The light shines in my face
Blinding my inner space
I run recoil and recover
Calm sent from the mother
Escape this admonished battle
Unjustified truth to tackle
Going on without hate
Tempting all that decide fate
When all comes down to this
The nameless make it bliss
Throwing through the thespian
Lest all life boil to jesting.
Copyright ©
HelixGreg
... [
2003-10-01 15:05:00]
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Re: Serenity Inside Me
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by jaeann on
Wednesday, 1st October 2003 @ 03:16:11 PM AEST
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| explicit ominous feral rage........perfect decription!!! excellent write!!! |
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Re: Serenity Inside Me
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 1st October 2003 @ 05:28:08 PM AEST
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| nice work but do you think no other poet took time to create their work? perhaps you need t comment on more poems. |
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Re: Serenity Inside Me
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Wednesday, 1st October 2003 @ 08:39:34 PM AEST
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I read your poem and saw the word "Cesspool" and "thespian". Cesspool is in my poem "A Moment's Distress" and "Thespian" is my IMPROV nickname. So basically I really like your choice of words =) That's my random thought............
It was a great poem, I enjoyed it! |
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