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Why Won't You
Contributed by
MoonlitAngel
on
Tuesday, 30th September 2003 @ 11:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The dark is closing in
I just feel so alone
It's getting harder to breathe
My back's against the wall
But you won't help me now
Even if I beg you please
I feel so lost on this dark lonely road
There's no one I can depend on but me
The light fades a little more every day
This life is wearing me thin and I'm so cold
The pain is killing me
Taking over my head
I'm not strong enough for this
It's all I think about
It's eating me alive
This constant unhappiness
How can I sit here and tell someone else
Not to quit and that life is worth living
When I'm not even sure I believe it
When part of me only wants to give up
I'm so scared I'll never see that day
I'm so scared these tears will give me away
What part of this don't you understand?
Why won't you even just reach out your hand?
I never thought I'd feel this alone
Now that some people's true colours have shown
And as the darkness embraces me
I just hope you know where you're leaving me
Copyright ©
MoonlitAngel
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2003-09-30 23:25:00]
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Re: Why Won't You
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by LovingWhispers on
Wednesday, 1st October 2003 @ 01:40:29 AM AEST
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come here hun *opens arms*
I hear you and your pain..and you better believe lifes worth living.There so much out there not yet taken in.Yes it hurts to deal with what has happened to you,but I know you are strong..and you have a wonderful heart..two great qualites :) Chin up and strike the day..can only be what YOU make it.Dont let others ruin it for you :)
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Re: Why Won't You
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by Saira on
Wednesday, 1st October 2003 @ 05:10:35 PM AEST
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Oh Angel, this is so heart touching poem...so much pain. Be a brave girl, I hope everything gets straighten up for you soon! Excellent write, though.
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