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FIRST TRY AT HAIKU
Contributed by
lovingcritters
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Tuesday, 30th September 2003 @ 11:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
AmericanTragedy
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RIFLES FIRE BLANKS
FLAGGED COFFIN
TEARS!
Copyright ©
lovingcritters
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2003-09-30 23:05:00]
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Re: FIRST TRY AT HAIKU
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by lovingcritters on
Wednesday, 1st October 2003 @ 12:21:36 AM AEST
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This is lovingcritters commenting on lovingcritters....over and out!
I'm so sorry that I messed this up so badly...it's a subject that I have really been feeling sad about. I understand I've done this all wrong....So sorry....I'll do better next time I promise....
Please forgive
Lovingcritters to lovingcritters and everyone
Connie Sue |
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Re: FIRST TRY AT HAIKU
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by LovingWhispers on
Wednesday, 1st October 2003 @ 01:18:48 AM AEST
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| The only thing you've messed up is my makeup lol..I get what you're saying,my emotions certainly got what your feeling and my arms surely reach out to hold you.Dont ever apologise my dear friend Connie...you are a source of great wisdom,tender heart,warm comfort and solid truth.Everyone here loves you..needs your voice..make no apologies for being you.(((hugs))) |
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Re: FIRST TRY AT HAIKU
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 1st October 2003 @ 08:30:59 AM AEST
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well done
Shari |
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Re: FIRST TRY AT HAIKU
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by norm on
Wednesday, 1st October 2003 @ 09:30:56 AM AEST
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LC...you conveyed in three lines what
some folks would take 10 stanzas to cover..
Well done I say...
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Re: FIRST TRY AT HAIKU
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 1st October 2003 @ 10:26:17 AM AEST
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great job Conni
michelle |
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Re: FIRST TRY AT HAIKU
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by PoloRM on
Wednesday, 1st October 2003 @ 10:58:54 AM AEST
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One should not apologize
If nothing he's done wrong
Instead let others compromise
And comment on the poet's song.
To take so few out of thousands words
The poet chooses from the moving herds
It's a tough job I agree,
running after vocab...
Much more difficult I would think,
Then working in a chemical lab.
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Re: FIRST TRY AT HAIKU
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by jaeann on
Wednesday, 1st October 2003 @ 12:21:13 PM AEST
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| perfect connie!!!!! |
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Re: FIRST TRY AT HAIKU
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by Crow on
Wednesday, 1st October 2003 @ 03:29:11 PM AEST
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yes, very good i`ll look for more! very pointed.
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Re: FIRST TRY AT HAIKU
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by Saira on
Thursday, 2nd October 2003 @ 02:28:09 PM AEST
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No need to be sorry, Connie. This is precisely a good one!
Saira |
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