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What is Love
Contributed by
nolan
on
Tuesday, 30th September 2003 @ 10:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Some people say love is
two people hugging and kissing,
I am not saying there're wrong
but here are some more suggestions.
Love can be a guy or gal,
talking and laughing
and just being a pal.
Love can also be being nice and kind,
you might not even know them
but it still benifits their mind.
Love could also be forgiving,
you might say something wrong
but with love life is still worth living.
What is love we may have different ideas,
but I think love is;
Liking
Obliging
Volunteering
Endearment
Copyright ©
nolan
... [
2003-09-30 22:25:00]
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Re: What is Love
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by HelixGreg on
Tuesday, 30th September 2003 @ 10:43:10 PM AEST
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| I think that this is a great poem! Your rhyming is good but your rhythym could be better. I really love it though! get the pun...? |
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Re: What is Love
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by LovingWhispers on
Wednesday, 1st October 2003 @ 01:50:32 AM AEST
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| Nice thoughts..and yes love comes in many forms..and not necessarily rhythmic ones ;)We write as we feel..*smiles* |
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