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You're So Undefined
Contributed by
MoonlitAngel
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Tuesday, 30th September 2003 @ 02:25:00 AM in AEST
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Your face is always the same
You go on about your day
With a smile that never seems to fade
How am I supposed to know when it's fake?
You say you don't let it get you down
But when no one else is around
You tell me everyone who never frowns
Eventually breaks down
Well why do you make it so complicated
When you know it gets me frustrated
Why can't you just be straight with me
And give exactly what you expect of me
You know by now I can't read your mind
Your emotions are so undefined
Just give in and stop fighting it
Let yourself break down a little bit
I don't really want to see you cry
But I know my love could dry your eyes
I would kiss every heart-wrenching tear goodbye
Until the hurt is gone and you just smile
Nobody knows as well as me
And even I can't always see
The hurt which to yourself you keep
Still I don't have a clue how you feel
Take a moment in your solitary corner
To make your heart a little bit warmer
Open it up to me a little bit more
Show me something I could never ignore
I need you to tell me what you're thinking
Before my faith starts slowly sinking
Because how can I turn to you to fall apart
If you won't even tell me what's in your heart
Copyright ©
MoonlitAngel
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2003-09-30 02:25:00]
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Re: You're So Undefined
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by LovingWhispers on
Tuesday, 30th September 2003 @ 03:53:11 AM AEST
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WOW!! Hun this is really excellent.The love and care you hold for him is beautiful.An understanding,nurturing love is very special indeed.Dont give up on him sweetie..your heart will do him wonders..All the best to you both xx
Sharon |
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Re: You're So Undefined
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 30th September 2003 @ 09:16:40 AM AEST
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| ooooo! dee! this is soooooooooo good! wow! i think its your best yet! from first to last lines this poem took me in and moved me:) hugs n' love nessa xx |
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Re: You're So Undefined
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by DreamWeaver on
Tuesday, 30th September 2003 @ 08:46:42 PM AEST
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| This poem has so much emotion ... the flow and rhyme is excellent ... a great write .... Jan |
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Re: You're So Undefined
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 30th September 2003 @ 10:40:08 PM AEST
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I must admit I liked this poem, but I am amazed with the ***** your boyfriend puts up with. Maybe your heart should be a little bit warmer to.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: You're So Undefined
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Tuesday, 30th September 2003 @ 11:48:12 PM AEST
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This is good but I think Joel's right....
Your boyfriend probably feels the same frustrations with you.... love is a two way street you can't expect to be loved with a whole heart if you don't love with a whole heart.... instead of questioning him like this
let him know he can trust you by your actions. |
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