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Am I Insane?
Contributed by
poison_touch666
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Monday, 29th September 2003 @ 11:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Am I insane,
I feel a voice inside of me,
Without talking it commands me,
Without words it talks to me,
Telling me that I am hated,
Telling me to hate.
Am I insane,
Thinking my friends are against me,
Random words entering my head,
Making me feel as though I'll explode,
Compolsive behaviour hurting my brain,
Counting every drop in the rain.
Am I insane,
If i like the pretty flame,
Want to see it dance one more on whatever i have,
If i have twisted psycopathic thoughts,
Am I insane.
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poison_touch666
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2003-09-29 23:45:00]
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Re: Am I Insane?
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by Kalika on
Tuesday, 30th September 2003 @ 12:32:58 AM AEST
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Someone oncee told me that if you have enough wits to ask if ur crazy ur not....
nice write
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Re: Am I Insane?
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by Coquillion on
Tuesday, 30th September 2003 @ 09:43:12 AM AEST
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| I loved your poem - it struck a nerve in me |
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Re: Am I Insane?
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by sugarboy on
Tuesday, 30th September 2003 @ 02:33:56 PM AEST
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| There's a thin line between sanity and the alternative (as your poem shows). The poem portrays anxiety and confusion very well. |
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Re: Am I Insane?
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 2nd October 2003 @ 08:26:19 PM AEST
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I liked this very much and no you are not insane just different like me :). I like to watch fire to it captivates me and strengthens my soul.
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