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Pain
Contributed by
poison_touch666
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Monday, 29th September 2003 @ 11:05:00 PM in AEST
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I'm sufficated by pain,
It runs through my every vein,
Pumps through all my arteries,
Spreading through my capilleries,
Engulfing every cell of me,
It will never set me free,
My body's enveloped in pain,
Constantly making me insane,
In the pit of my stomach lies a pain like no other,
Eating away at me for what seems like forever,
My tears have turned to blood,
Feeling so alone and misunderstood,
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2003-09-29 23:05:00]
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Re: Pain
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by Kalika on
Tuesday, 30th September 2003 @ 12:36:10 AM AEST
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I dont know what ur going through, emotional or physical pain here but its very vivid that there is extreme pain. I am well aquainted with both kinds of pain, and am here if you want someone to listen who may know what it feels like. Drop me a line netime.
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Re: Pain
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by painted_echos on
Tuesday, 30th September 2003 @ 01:40:03 AM AEST
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| i am so sorry; i hope you find peace soon. m |
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Re: Pain
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by Saira on
Tuesday, 30th September 2003 @ 01:17:38 PM AEST
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I hope this pain goes away soon...very well written though. Stay well, friend.
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Re: Pain
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 1st October 2003 @ 04:12:48 PM AEST
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I loved this very descriptive and well thought out. Great job.
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Re: Pain
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by alecfernadez on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 06:30:22 AM AEST
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| This poems great, good use of description to describe your feelings. It kinda makes the reader feel your pain, and thats both scary and incredible in a writer. Scary because you must be in a ***** load of pain, and incredibe because the ability to make people feel what you are feeling with words is very very very difficult to do! Congratulations |
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Re: Pain
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by jeannoh on
Sunday, 17th October 2004 @ 02:05:20 AM AEST
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I liked this poem
very discriptive
easy read
thank you for sharing
Jeannoh |
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