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sydney and the red centre
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Monday, 29th September 2003 @ 09:05:00 AM in AEST
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take me back to our camel ride in the red desert
when time was ours and nature played a concert
when flowers shined and earth smelled sweet
your arms cozily around me you could keep
from high above up on our camel's seat...
make all time stop and let us laugh
again at the playing baby giraffe
at sydney zoo where we had all day
to walk and kiss and see him play...
opera and harbour in plain view,
when there was only just me and you
able to touch and breathe the same air
those lovely weeks when we had not a care...
our stars are different; horizens vary
but in our hearts this true love we carry
we wait until for us comes the day
we shall not part, but forever stay...
where flowers shine and earth smells sweet.
°´°*ø,¸¸,ø*°´°*ø,¸¸,ø*°´°*ø,¸¸,ø*°´°*ø,¸¸,ø*°´°*
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Re: sydney and the red centre
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by MoonlitAngel on
Monday, 29th September 2003 @ 10:32:56 AM AEST
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I sure hope that day comes soon, for both of us... this is such a lovely, nostalgic write. Very pretty, for lack of a better word in the early rnorning, lol. Best wishes,
~ Dee |
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Re: sydney and the red centre
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by LovingWhispers on
Monday, 29th September 2003 @ 11:22:09 AM AEST
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*sniff*..Its like I am watching a romantic flick..You keep this up..Im gonna have to marry the manager of a kleenex company *unravels toilet paper*...out of kleenex and making a mess lol...This is very loving..very very loving :)
(((huggers))
Sharon xx |
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Re: sydney and the red centre
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 29th September 2003 @ 01:05:29 PM AEST
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so very touching and lovely
Shari |
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Re: sydney and the red centre
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by Rakerman1999 on
Monday, 29th September 2003 @ 02:38:34 PM AEST
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| Able to touch and breath the same air...( sighs and thinks damn am I jealous) lol...so loving and hopeful nessa... well done :o) Larry |
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Re: sydney and the red centre
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by roisin on
Monday, 29th September 2003 @ 03:14:59 PM AEST
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sweet memories....beautiful nessa!!!!!
hugs
rosie |
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Re: sydney and the red centre
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by Crow on
Monday, 29th September 2003 @ 06:56:13 PM AEST
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| a beautiful write, and I wish you every good thing. Crow |
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Re: sydney and the red centre
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by Bongo on
Monday, 29th September 2003 @ 09:15:48 PM AEST
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The Kookas are singing
The Giraffe still playing
Camels are riding
They ask, where is Ness hiding?
I answer with a smile
It's only a little while
Together we will be
A family for thee. |
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Re: sydney and the red centre
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by PoloRM on
Monday, 29th September 2003 @ 11:12:48 PM AEST
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Lovely write. =)
What's so great about a camel ride
As I've already said it's like a tide
Beside this transport is so out-dated
I remember it made me feel quite nauseated...
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Re: sydney and the red centre
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by DreamWeaver on
Tuesday, 30th September 2003 @ 02:13:18 AM AEST
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| I'm so glad you loved it here ... and you have so many wonderful memories to keep ... all my best wishes for a lovely Christmas together ... Jan |
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Re: sydney and the red centre
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by norm on
Tuesday, 30th September 2003 @ 11:16:23 AM AEST
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A beautiful write surrounded by sight
of Sydney harbor opera house height,
With the zoo in the foreground
And love in the air
Nessa has brought us international flair. |
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Re: sydney and the red centre
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 1st October 2003 @ 07:30:27 AM AEST
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Very lovely poem..these lines are very touching..
"our stars are different; horizens vary
but in our hearts this true love we carry
we wait until for us comes the day
we shall not part, but forever stay..."
beautiful mind.. beautiful lady..beautiful poem... venkat |
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Re: sydney and the red centre
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by Merry on
Wednesday, 8th October 2003 @ 03:51:47 PM AEST
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oh Nessa this is such a charming and sweet poem of special memories and time spent with the one you love - wishing you both much love and a happy future together
merry |
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