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Decembers`s Eyes
Contributed by
crow
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Monday, 29th September 2003 @ 06:25:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Blanketed with her winter coat,
she pulls lifes blood back to her.
How barren the world seems,
as she hides her children again.
A winters sky so cold and clear
silence she keeps as she works with
paled eyes. Still the sounds so valid
of life and rebirth, As I look through Decembers eyes..........Crow
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Re: Decembers`s Eyes
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by shelby on
Monday, 29th September 2003 @ 08:19:00 AM AEST
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this needs to be put into a book my friend, your words so vivid and beautiful. You captured a winters day in December perfectly I can fill the chill even though now Im in the desert.Beautiful write
michelle |
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Re: Decembers`s Eyes
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 29th September 2003 @ 08:33:21 AM AEST
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very lovely
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Re: Decembers`s Eyes
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Monday, 29th September 2003 @ 10:38:06 AM AEST
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| Wow, let me know when you publish your book!! :) This is so pretty. |
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Re: Decembers`s Eyes
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by LovingWhispers on
Monday, 29th September 2003 @ 11:32:30 AM AEST
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"Still the sounds so valid
of life and rebirth, As I look through Decembers eyes"
Baby's breath could only compare to the warmth of this beautiful write...
'Tis not in a book,I would like to see your writing...but carved in stone on a mountain...
Words so free from the heart and soul should remain just so..."free"
~wa do~ |
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Re: Decembers`s Eyes
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by Walt on
Monday, 29th September 2003 @ 03:38:41 PM AEST
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| In all that I feel and see, nothing is as great as being captured by a picture in which I can live. Great write, Walt |
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Re: Decembers`s Eyes
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by Merry on
Monday, 29th September 2003 @ 04:49:24 PM AEST
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very still - that's what I feel when I read this - it really is quite a wonderful write...
merry |
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Re: Decembers`s Eyes
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by jaeann on
Monday, 29th September 2003 @ 09:52:46 PM AEST
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| a winter snow-covered wolf....that's what this beautiful piece brings to mind....wow!!! |
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Re: Decembers`s Eyes
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by me on
Friday, 10th October 2003 @ 01:01:49 AM AEST
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| i love your poems. they are both simple, and profound... i cant explain exactly what i mean, but they are beautiful!very real... |
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