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My Favorite Things
Contributed by
sugar0986
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Monday, 29th September 2003 @ 05:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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My favorite things
are always at my side
watching over me.
My favorite things
are always like a shadow,
standing right beside me.
My favorite things
are always floating above me,
like a feather that falls from a bird.
My favorite things
are always there,
right when I need them the most.
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2003-09-29 05:05:00]
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Re: My Favorite Things
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by Dragons_Of_Rose on
Monday, 29th September 2003 @ 09:26:32 PM AEST
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| And this, is what makes them a favorite. Nice write. |
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Re: My Favorite Things
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Sunday, 19th October 2003 @ 05:45:20 PM AEST
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sugar,
Lovely write, and interesting theme...... it makes me think. What are my favorite things? hmmmmm........ That third stanza is my favorite- with the "feather that falls from a bird". Love that line =)
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