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Tomorrow It Might Be Okay
Contributed by
MoonlitAngel
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Sunday, 28th September 2003 @ 06:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I'm lying in the dark
Just trying so hard
To believe everything's gonna be okay
But I feel it less and less
And everything's a mess
I only want to find a little peace today
Tomorrow could be different
Tomorrow could be better
But until I'm with you I'll sleep it all away
Tomorrow could be mine
Tomorrow could be ours
There's only one thing I need to hear you say
And everything will be okay
I'm walking in the rain
The world looks so plain
It's hard to stand where I once stood with you
I've been waiting forever
It's not getting any better
I can't understand why there's no break for me and you
Tomorrow will be the same
Tomorrow you'll take the blame
Somehow it always stays so far away
Tomorrow I could fall
Tomorrow I might crawl
It's out of my reach even as I sit and pray
For everything to be okay
It's all out of my control
I don't have a hold on it
And what are we gonna do now?
Tell me what I need to hear
Please just ease this constant fear
I've had enough and I need a little light right now
Tomorrow could be terrible
Tomorrow could be bearable
But it's gotta get a little closer every day
Tomorrow might be it
Tomorrow I might quit
But if you say the one thing I need to hear you say
Then everything will be okay
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MoonlitAngel
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2003-09-28 18:35:00]
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Re: Tomorrow It Might Be Okay
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 28th September 2003 @ 09:05:24 PM AEST
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Lovely write, Moonlit..Hang strong.. tomorrow will become today soon.....
Jenni |
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Re: Tomorrow It Might Be Okay
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by JJTiger on
Sunday, 28th September 2003 @ 09:41:29 PM AEST
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| Just hold on. One day that awaited tomorrow will come. It may not be how we thought it would be... I can so relate to this poem. Wonder when that day will come...Can i last til that day? Will it ever come. But one day there that tomorrow will be. Very beautiful poem. Great Write. Keep up the work. |
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Re: Tomorrow It Might Be Okay
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 28th September 2003 @ 11:27:00 PM AEST
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| awwww! big huggs!! youve waited long enough and i hope tomorrow comes soon, for lots of reasons for me too, love and hugs kiddo, nessa xx |
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Re: Tomorrow It Might Be Okay
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by EmSal on
Sunday, 28th September 2003 @ 11:52:14 PM AEST
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Oh such a beautifully sad write. All the best hey. Take care.
Emma. |
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Re: Tomorrow It Might Be Okay
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by jaeann on
Monday, 29th September 2003 @ 09:40:38 PM AEST
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so very true
you made me boo hoo
i truly hope that you
find that elusive tomorrow too!!! |
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Re: Tomorrow It Might Be Okay
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by Coquillion on
Thursday, 2nd October 2003 @ 10:40:58 AM AEST
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| That was S A D!!!!! I loved it !! Thank you |
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