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Down n Out
Contributed by
s_u_n_a_n_g_e_l_85
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Sunday, 28th September 2003 @ 01:35:00 PM in AEST
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I don’t know how to trust anymore
Feelin’ all alone
Lost in this universe
You broke my heart
Tore me apart
Pushed me down,
Now I don't know if I can get back up again
Pushed down too many times
Each time’s getin’ harder
I’ve cried, now there’s nothin’ left
I don’t wanna chase after you no more
Don’t wanna be second best anymore
Losin’ it in my head
Can’t keep nothin’ straight anymore
I don’t wanna be alone
Don’t wanna be this way anymore
Everythings gone and here I am
Scared because I haven’t been this way before
I’m back down
Don’t know if I can get back up this time
I’m hurtin’…tears are startin’…
Heart’s broken and I can’t see what’s left
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2003-09-28 13:35:00]
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Re: Down n Out
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by sicknivesevered on
Sunday, 28th September 2003 @ 06:10:30 PM AEST
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| Well, what a flood of emotion. Best o' luck to ya. Great poem. |
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Re: Down n Out
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by EmSal on
Monday, 29th September 2003 @ 12:03:37 AM AEST
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"Scared because I haven’t been this way before" - Wow I to feel this way, I've felt it now for about 4 years and I'm still scared and I know that I've been there before...maybe because I know what is going to happen that it is still scary. Such an excellent write. I do hope that you find some peace and not feel this way for too long, I know it isn't a very good feeling at all...and believe me even though your heart is broken, and it may feel like there is nothing left, the pain should ease if you let it, and you may find what is left. All the best and take care.
Emma.
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