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?????
Contributed by
Jilly
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Sunday, 28th September 2003 @ 01:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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When did you become the one I want to hold
When did you become the one I love and never told
Why do you believe in me when no one else cares
Why do you persist when no one else dares
How can you look at me and see the world in my eyes
How can you communicate the ocean depths and the skies
Where do we draw the line between friendship and love
Where do we hide from the stars up above
What is the price of this what can we afford…
What do we do now with this double edged sword
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Jilly
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2003-09-28 01:35:00]
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Re: ?????
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 28th September 2003 @ 02:24:48 AM AEST
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Jilly, these are all very potent questions.. it was well written... Hope you find some answers.... "Double-Edged Sword" would make a perfect title for it.. I loved it...
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Re: ?????
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by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on
Sunday, 28th September 2003 @ 02:55:09 PM AEST
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Hi jilly,
these are question i always ask my self this is a very good write,keep it up. |
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