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Fool`s Thought
Contributed by
crow
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Sunday, 28th September 2003 @ 12:35:00 AM in AEST
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Dark clouds of approaching winter,
no match for the changing inside.
So thoughtless of empty halls,
careful not to make a sound.
Never disturb what lies in rest,
A fool`s thought.
Everyone I have ever loved,
I pray still love me today.
Where do I go to search for me once more,
my winter of empty halls...........Crow
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2003-09-28 00:35:00]
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Re: Fool`s Thought
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by EmSal on
Sunday, 28th September 2003 @ 12:40:19 AM AEST
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Hey it was some good thoughs put into an excellent write.
Emma. |
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Re: Fool`s Thought
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by LovingWhispers on
Sunday, 28th September 2003 @ 12:44:07 AM AEST
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| "You" are found in all you do and say....and all you do and say is beautiful...Search no more my friend...just listen.Self doubt is dancing around you...do not become its partner.Move onto another song. ;) Im always here..Sharon |
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Re: Fool`s Thought
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 28th September 2003 @ 02:20:00 AM AEST
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Interesting write, Crow... I have to agree with Whispers...
Jenni |
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Re: Fool`s Thought
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by venkat on
Sunday, 28th September 2003 @ 03:00:40 AM AEST
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| such feelings I knew...beautifully written. venkat |
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Re: Fool`s Thought
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by jaeann on
Sunday, 28th September 2003 @ 04:12:45 AM AEST
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| ahhhhh winter is coming, is it not....crow, you touch me so..... you read my soul with your thoughts and words....... |
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Re: Fool`s Thought
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 28th September 2003 @ 07:58:56 AM AEST
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have no words for this one
but that I am there for you
Shari |
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Re: Fool`s Thought
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by lovingcritters on
Sunday, 28th September 2003 @ 09:42:42 PM AEST
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What a wonderful observation Crow.
Seasons may come and seasons may go,
I do feel differently in side with each one.
Summer is over and it's filled with fun,
Winter approaches and for some reason,
It always seem so comforting to me.
I wonder if it's because like a tree,
we draw within ourselves to renew....
I the love the winter Crow.....the blankets of snow....seem so cosy, so protective somehow...Perhaps that's why you feel emptiness in your halls....you see coldness.
But I know you....they won't stay empty long.
You'll reach out and love and make someone very strong.,'cause that just you!
lovingcritters
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Re: Fool`s Thought
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by painted_echos on
Monday, 29th September 2003 @ 01:54:55 AM AEST
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| where are you afraid to go crow? compassion flows from your heart for those you write about. but do you accept what flows from another into your own? do you fear to let someone in...to protect your heart with empty halls? time to open the windows and doors, before it gets too cold. (this.. from miss presumptuous, herself, who by the way, opened her heart and got smashed!) |
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