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Releasing My Disease
Contributed by
HedderMarie
on
Sunday, 28th September 2003 @ 12:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Release me,
From this dirty ol' disease,
I've got the poison,
And there's no remedy.
To get me through another day,
It seems to be I'm drowning,
And help won't be on the way.
It might as well release me,
Because of now,
Erasing I is all it needs,
And the bright lights are getting closer it seems.
No one is trying to save me,
They're letting me fall on my own,
I continue to walk in circles,
Because I really have no home.
So it's just me,
Left with my misery,
Off me, it begins to feed,
As this diease constantly grows,
This life I no longer need.
The end is coming,
There's nothing left of me,
I might as well give in,
To this dirty ol' disease.
Heather Marie Hutchins
Copyright ©
HedderMarie
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2003-09-28 00:05:00]
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Re: Releasing My Disease
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by EmSal on
Sunday, 28th September 2003 @ 12:42:38 AM AEST
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Ohhh what a pretty good write for 5 minutes, you must have had the inspiration to do so. I found this interesting and excellently expressed, although helplessness was evident...I felt it...Hope everything will be okay.
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Re: Releasing My Disease
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 28th September 2003 @ 02:29:21 AM AEST
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Well expressed..but never give in...
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