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Thie Beating Clock
Contributed by
MyInspiration
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Saturday, 27th September 2003 @ 02:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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A thrown phone lies on my bed, resting in its final place, my grave of solitude. A lost heart lodged into my chest, with cold blood running through. Whispers of grievance are all that remain, I am lost. Misconceptions and speculation fill my head, dew forming a frost. A raining downpour from my eyes is all I can see, shut closed they remain, preventing the pain from reaching to deep. I must realize that not all is lost, but this clock works against me. A void remains in my heart that no clock can fill. The clock is gone; time is now my only riddle. How can I work this out? Can we make it work? I must give it a chance; I have to stop the hurt. Please give me your time of day; let me hold your hands. Let me kiss your lips, let me have the chance. Make this clock stop spinning so I can savor every minute I'm with you. Every minute we share lasts forever but it’s never enough. Please let me hold you, let me savor what feels so true.
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Re: Thie Beating Clock
(User Rating: 1 ) by poetrygodslove on
Saturday, 27th September 2003 @ 05:06:28 PM AEST (User
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very nice...... |
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Re: Thie Beating Clock
(User Rating: 1 ) by EmSal on
Saturday, 27th September 2003 @ 05:43:54 PM AEST (User
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Awww so lovely yet so sad. I hope everything turns out okay. All the best.
Emma. |
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Re: Thie Beating Clock
(User Rating: 1 ) by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Saturday, 27th September 2003 @ 07:46:05 PM AEST (User
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this is so sad... :(
nicely written though! |
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Re: Thie Beating Clock
(User Rating: 1 ) by LovingWhispers on
Sunday, 28th September 2003 @ 03:07:30 AM AEST (User
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I can really feel the frustration and the yearning here..Its great but it would have looked so much better set out in verses *shrugs* (please dont take offence) *smiles*
Excellent! |
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Re: Thie Beating Clock
(User Rating: 1 ) by painted_echos on
Monday, 29th September 2003 @ 02:23:13 AM AEST (User
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well, that would completely melt my heart if said to me...this is lovely. |
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