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A Poem to the Girl on the Sofa
Contributed by
Butterat_Zool
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Saturday, 27th September 2003 @ 09:05:00 AM in AEST
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Hey girl, sitting next to me,
You’re cute, and fun to be with.
Can you feel it?
My arm, resting along the top
Of the sofa, that “accidentally” wound up
Behind your pretty little head?
Can you feel my hand as your golden
Pony tail swishes about with the nods and turns
Of your body language?
Can you feel me pet you?
Do you like it?
Do you care?
Can you see me, looking so deeply into
Your lovely blue eyes,
Wondering what thoughts and treasures
Lie behind them?
Did you see me staring through your clothes
At the flesh that you hide from the world?
Mentally, my maw lies agape, sucking the life
From your bosom.
I want to love you.
I want to **** you.
I want to know your name.
Copyright ©
Butterat_Zool
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2003-09-27 09:05:00]
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Re: A Poem to the Girl on the Sofa
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by norm on
Saturday, 27th September 2003 @ 12:23:26 PM AEST
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a man should want, a lass be shy
she can't be foward or the guy
Will run and hide, aloof is best,
proven by a 1000000 year test
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Re: A Poem to the Girl on the Sofa
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by poetrygodslove on
Saturday, 27th September 2003 @ 04:06:00 PM AEST
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i give you an A for being honest....but i give you a F for wanting to get to know this girl in a intimate way before you really know her enough to do so..soooo many yound men and young ladies get to involved to early...you may say that is life now days.yes i understand that..but you can also tell now days there is hardly any committment to marriage and if so divorce...so go back to the basics of dating and getting to know one another and get an education to take care of that lady and children that will come...that will be giving you a 100 for your entire life....and
ask the good lord to help in this decision because others around you will preasure u....but he will help and you you will be better off waiting for that wondeful life he will give you if you ask then wishing you didnt sleep with that one and that one and that one..understand...girls to dont make a committment now adays to much....so watch out....if they can easily say yes to you..how many guys have they said yes to and so do you want that type.....hard to be young now adays.....for girls have to watch out for everynice word that comes out of a guys mouth because what is it that they really WANT....god bless..take care...... |
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Re: A Poem to the Girl on the Sofa
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 28th September 2003 @ 08:04:46 PM AEST
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hey good poem I can relate to it soooooooo much. I must agree with the previous comment although that was ballsy and uncalled for, but w/e good honest poem.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: A Poem to the Girl on the Sofa
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by Butterat_Zool on
Friday, 24th October 2003 @ 03:01:20 AM AEST
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| Oh come on now guys... How many times per day do you find yourself looking at a hot girl and thinking, even for just a fraction of a second, and regardless of whether or not the thought is practical, or realistic, that you would totally get with her? That's what this is about. Here's your love at first sight, you saps. Just because you folks wan't (or can't) admit that you do it too, that doesn't mean that i can't write it. That's what i'm here for, Honesty. I love you all. Have a nice day and a good rest of your life, Butterat Zool. |
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