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Waking up in Hell
Contributed by
Dark-Poet
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Friday, 26th September 2003 @ 11:05:00 AM in AEST
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Waking up in Hell
What is this place?
How did I get here?
A constant chill is running through me and shattering my spine,
Blood is trickling down my skin like the rain on windows,
I feel sick to the stomach as misery and agony surround me,
Skulls crush and crunch as I walk this disturbing land,
The blood stained walls are rotting just like the inhabitants of this place,
The rancid smell of rotting flesh and decay take over my blood,
The air is stale and the taste of death roams within it,
This place offers nothing but a life of pure evil,
All I can hear is the screaming of lost souls,
All I can see is eternal damnation,
Surely no one deserves this?
Then I understand,
This place of insanity is now my reality,
The Christ has sentenced me to this life of nightmares,
For in him I never believed,
How could I trust a promise of eternal life?
He's not a God but a mad man I thought,
Now I am stuck with eternal death and evil,
I take my place in this dark land,
Becoming a soldier in the army of the damned.
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Re: Waking up in Hell
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by Tiffany on
Friday, 26th September 2003 @ 07:11:08 PM AEST
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The poems I have seen you write are all very very good. I definintly like this one. It is a very deep poem. I can almost picture it. i will keep an eye out for more of you poetry.
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Re: Waking up in Hell
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by poetrygodslove on
Saturday, 27th September 2003 @ 12:57:12 AM AEST
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| well what happened when you wroke up ? did you get down on your knees and praise god for saving your soul....or did you ask jesus in your heart.....he loves you....loved the poem because it will wake someone up....thanks for sharing...........read poetrygodslove.....ty... |
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Re: Waking up in Hell
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 28th September 2003 @ 02:12:32 AM AEST
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This was awesome I am really at a loss for words. I love the image of the skulls crunching under your feet.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Waking up in Hell
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by jaeann on
Sunday, 28th September 2003 @ 03:46:22 AM AEST
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| hauntingly familiar!!!! awesome job...you tapped the feeling of damnation ..the evil energy we all posses within us...somewhere....the nightmares are the bridge to that side.....to awake and write is to burn that bridge.....your writing is amazing!!! |
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Re: Waking up in Hell
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by Aika on
Monday, 29th September 2003 @ 07:20:04 AM AEST
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Well, wonderful poem I have to say
so deep and real - I know it well
I wish you saw the light of life
I wish you could feel alive
I wish you were not this soldier
I so much wish you to get over the border
of evil and darkness.....
Wishing you all the best, Dan..
aika:-) |
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