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Why I Bleed
Contributed by
poison_touch666
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Friday, 26th September 2003 @ 08:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Time has passed, friendships broken,
Painfull memories, so much shalln't be spoken,
You have gone yet your ghost still haunts me,
The past shall never let me be.
I hate all of what you did,
How could you, i was just a kid,
No guilt, no sign of regret,
You scarred me, I will never forget.
You're the reason I hate me,
You're the reason I bleed and cry,
Nothing can stop this pain,
Thinking about it drives me insane.
I despise your very existence,
Want to destroy your every escence,
I hate you for the way you hurt me,
A way in which i couldn't see.
The wounds cut deeper than any knife,
I can hate you take away your pointless life,
I could make you feel all the pain i felt,
But still this burning pain won't melt.
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2003-09-26 08:45:00]
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Re: Why I Bleed
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 26th September 2003 @ 09:47:31 AM AEST
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Again,your emotion is quite evident.It is expressed through very beautiful words.Your pain will oneday subside.Sure the scar remains,but you heal somewhere along the line and find a joy.Thats when your poetry will change into Happy happy happy. Although,happy gets read alot less than pain for some reason.But never stop your form of expression! It is a healing in progress!
Awesome write,my friend.
Angel always...godspeed...joni 0:-) |
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Re: Why I Bleed
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by afraid_of_fear on
Friday, 26th September 2003 @ 01:52:06 PM AEST
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this is so beautiful al, a really good poem. keep it up!!
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Re: Why I Bleed
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 27th September 2003 @ 03:04:32 AM AEST
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I am commenting because i like very much. I loved the last line summed up the poem very well. Very awesome indeed.
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