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Raining Tears

Contributed by betrayedsoul on Thursday, 25th September 2003 @ 09:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Raining Tears

Yet again its raining
My teary eyes straining
To find some light
On this cold dreary night
Lost in the peace
Wishing it would never cease
Silver streaks in my hair..
Barely 18, but why care..
Thoughts of death over take my head
Can't hide forever, they all said
But I must hide my pain..
Though it may drive me insane
Too many answers unsaught
Too many nights I've faught
With death lingering around every corner
And tears from weary mourners
Its so much easier to hide
When you have no one in which you can abide
The rain feels so cool on my skin
I should have known I can not win
Tears raining down
Falling all around
Atleast the rain hides my tears
No one has to know my fears
My makeup smeared
Things ARE as I've feared
So let it rain
Let it wash away all my pain
Let me forget my past
So I can be free atlast
Just let the rain wash me away..
Let me die on this day...
I hear death calling
I feel my heart falling..
RING**Its dad..
He says shes looking bad..
A few more days at tops
He says as my heart drops..
Running to hide
ITS NOT FAIR, SHE TRIED
Why?
Why must any one die?
Sinking to my knees
Begging GOD PLEASE
Take ME, or any other..
But Please God Not my mother..

Copyright © betrayedsoul ... [ 2003-09-25 21:25:00]
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Re: Raining Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by EmSal on Thursday, 25th September 2003 @ 09:29:19 PM AEST
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Oh My this is so sad, this is a horrible thing to go through. Very painful but written with such emotion that drew me in. And good question - Why must anyone die? Thanks for sharing. All the best, take care.
Emma.

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