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Broken
Contributed by
crow
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Thursday, 25th September 2003 @ 09:05:00 PM in AEST
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A child that is broken,
I have seen a spirit.
Knows nothing but his pain,
is given nothing,
a heart that lays in dorment.
Was there grace, and relief
in the cool quiet closet
he was locked in,
to dream of Soulless children.......Crow
Copyright ©
crow
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2003-09-25 21:05:00]
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Re: Broken
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by Ilhar on
Thursday, 25th September 2003 @ 09:40:02 PM AEST
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very very sad, children are a gift to us to be loved and nutured to do otherwise is a crime
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Re: Broken
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by LovingWhispers on
Thursday, 25th September 2003 @ 10:32:52 PM AEST
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Eyes.."window of the soul"
A heart touched is a poem well expressed...Lovely...sad yet lovely. |
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Re: Broken
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 26th September 2003 @ 12:34:37 AM AEST
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Very touching....
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Re: Broken
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 26th September 2003 @ 12:59:15 AM AEST
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Oh, Crow for just an instant I allowed myself to go
back into time and be imprisoned once again. There is no peace, Crow...only futility!
Feelings of helplessness, confusion...but mostly wanting out....please let me out....why do you shut me away from you?
Sad Poem, Crow, but those are thoughts that come into my heart's view!
Very well written from the heart
lovingcritters
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Re: Broken
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by jaeann on
Friday, 26th September 2003 @ 01:12:44 AM AEST
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not many survive that dark place.....many go back to it because that's all they know.... such a sad write....you touched me deep inside....
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Re: Broken
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 26th September 2003 @ 04:29:46 AM AEST
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| Sad, yet very beautiful piece of poetry. Wonderful poem! |
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Re: Broken
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by Saira on
Friday, 26th September 2003 @ 01:56:19 PM AEST
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Very sad and heart touching write...you have said it all beautifully in such less words. Well done Crow!
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Re: Broken
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by Merry on
Saturday, 27th September 2003 @ 07:26:23 PM AEST
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chilling write - there is nothing more terrible than child abuse
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