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Pain's Arms
Contributed by
lilch4ever
on
Thursday, 25th September 2003 @ 08:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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We all reach out but too afraid to grab hold.
All wanting to make amends.
Pain slowly sucks you inside wrapping its arms around you not letting you go.
It buries you beneath the coral of itself.
It's a dark cloud hanging over you keeping you in the shadows of the night.
A death with arms you can't escape.
Pain's arms is like being in the deep cave of a visious bear keeping you trapped there.
Pain's arms is like being nailed to a cross a cross which you can't bare.
It's like leaches slowly sucking the life out of you.
It's an evil lying inside you.
Pain is a step from death.
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lilch4ever
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2003-09-25 20:45:00]
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Re: Pain's Arms
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by EmSal on
Thursday, 25th September 2003 @ 09:25:19 PM AEST
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Whoah this poem does speak for itself, very loudly too. A good description of imense pain. Take care.
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Re: Pain's Arms
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 27th September 2003 @ 02:50:01 AM AEST
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i loved this and loved the similes to. Great poem very descriptive.
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