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Closer To You

Contributed by MoonlitAngel on Thursday, 25th September 2003 @ 09:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



The clock ticks seconds away
The sky is so blue today
I finally get to see my baby
These times are all I live for
Came so far from ship to shore
Breathing in deep of the air from the sea

I'm getting closer to you

The trees seem to touch the sky
To the clouds they reach so high
I finally feel I can breathe again
Gulls skim the water's surface
Brushing it with a sweet kiss
It never looked or felt this way back then

I'm getting closer to you

I can't wait to see your face
And look into your eyes
Hold you tight in my arms' embrace
As the loneliness dies
My heart is bruised, it's so black and blue
The way I feel now is long overdue
I just wanna be closer to you

I'm on my way

Now I lay here in your arms
Feeling so safe from all harm
Revelling in every sweet, tender kiss
My pain eased with each smile and touch
Every moment means so much
I feel I've drifted away into bliss

I'm so much closer to you

I lose myself within you
I couldn't be happier to
Your touch like raging fire consumes me
Skin on skin, our bodies entwine
Feeling your hands all over mine
You take me away on a beautiful dream

I'm so much closer to you

Now our time's come to an end
And I have to say goodbye
I'm all alone again
Here without you I sit and cry
Because there's nothing else I can do
Without you I always feel kinda blue
I just wanna be closer to you

I'll find a way

The clock ticks seconds away
The sky is so gray today
And all I want is to see my baby

I just wanna be closer to you




Copyright © MoonlitAngel ... [ 2003-09-25 09:05:00]
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Re: Closer To You (User Rating: 1 )
by SinfullyTwisted on Thursday, 25th September 2003 @ 12:35:31 PM AEST
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Awesome. Great imagery and emotion. I envy you in some twisted little way. Keep writing.


Re: Closer To You (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 25th September 2003 @ 02:33:11 PM AEST
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ohhhh wow dee this is soooooooo beautiful!!! i love the gentle flow of it all and its soooo sweet:) *hands you a kleenex* as im now doing the same thing lol, im so happy you and dean had some time together, what a lovely write:) big hugs n' love nessa


Re: Closer To You (User Rating: 1 )
by sugar0986 on Sunday, 19th October 2003 @ 09:47:14 AM AEST
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I really Enjoyed this poem. I was I could write this well but, anyways keep up the good work . I will keep reading everything that you submit.




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