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The Observer
Contributed by
Kelly-Lee
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Wednesday, 24th September 2003 @ 11:45:00 PM in AEST
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You smile as the cold wind bites you,
And dance without a care,
Your laughter brings a smile to others,
But how empty is your stare.
You toss and turn for want of sleep,
The pressures you can't bear.
You shine by day as bright as sun,
With never-ending flair.
Your surrounded by friends who love you,
Who would trade their life for yours.
But your tears go unnoticed as they drop
upon the floor.
Copyright ©
Kelly-Lee
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2003-09-24 23:45:00]
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Re: The Observer
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 24th September 2003 @ 11:55:04 PM AEST
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Very beautifull even tho sad. Sometimes just knowing that someone else understands is the ounce of encouragement a person needs.
Great writing!
PEACE, JOY, LUV,
emy |
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Re: The Observer
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by punkwthn on
Wednesday, 24th September 2003 @ 11:55:06 PM AEST
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| Awww what a sad poem. It's wonderfully written, however. It flows really nicely. Well done!*~ |
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Re: The Observer
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 24th September 2003 @ 11:59:21 PM AEST
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Welcome to your-poetry.com, Kelly.. After reading this lovely poem, I'm hoping you post more soon... It is very touching and shows hoe caring you are.
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