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Take or Leave it
Contributed by
EmSal
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Wednesday, 24th September 2003 @ 09:05:00 PM in AEST
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Why you acting like that, like you’re so innocent?
Why are you smiling as you brush me aside?
Why did I let you choose me to torment?
Who gave you MY right to decide?
Who will be there for me, like I was there for you?
Will anyone else hate me as much as you did?
Why did you have to hurt me by being untrue?
Why did you have to keep your deceitful personality hid?
Could you maybe kill my heart a little more?
Could you stab me any harder with that blunted knife?
Is this the reaction you hoped for?
Or do you want to take my life?
Because if you want it, I am giving it to you,
I sure as hell hope it’s not what you expected,
Because my blood is red and not see through,
And unlike yours, it’s not deceitfully infected.
Aren’t you the one to decide whether to hurt me or not?
I am the one that has left you so far behind,
But the pain will not leave me no matter what,
It has made a home in my heart, body and mind.
But still my life I give you, come and get it from me,
I’ll hold it away from me, I don’t want to look,
My blood, my life, I will know but not see,
That it was you, oh yes my life you took.
Copyright ©
EmSal
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2003-09-24 21:05:00]
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Re: Take or Leave it
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 24th September 2003 @ 10:19:52 PM AEST
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Deeply painful....
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Re: Take or Leave it
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by emystar on
Thursday, 25th September 2003 @ 12:01:44 AM AEST
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I agree with Jenni.
I also know the feelings but when they came for my life I had 2 go!
Very good explaination of hurt that chills 2 the bone!
Good work!
Hang tuff!
PEACE, JOY, LUV,
emy |
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Re: Take or Leave it
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by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 25th September 2003 @ 01:28:36 AM AEST
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I'm so very sorry emsal,
I can feel your pain, and you are tortured indeed.....
Wish I could help in someway!
love and hugs
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Re: Take or Leave it
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by DreamWeaver on
Thursday, 25th September 2003 @ 02:36:20 AM AEST
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| Awesome write ... I relate so much to these words ... Jan |
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Re: Take or Leave it
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 25th September 2003 @ 03:20:59 AM AEST
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| Heartbreaking Emma, I'm always here for you. Awesome poem! |
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