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i hate the way...
Contributed by
Cancer
on
Wednesday, 24th September 2003 @ 12:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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i hate the way you look at me now
like i'm just another person
someone you deal with
not out of necessity or desire
but, out of habit, nothing more
i hate the way you touch me now
cold and passionless
like i'm just cutting into your sleep time
like you're doing me a favor
as if we didn't know each other at all
i hate the way you kiss me now
with someone else's tongue on your breath
scarcely hiding your disgust these days
you barely care enough to lie
i hate the way you make me feel now
like a burden, a never ending obstacle
the wall that keeps your joy at bay
you used to make me feel alive
now you just make me feel like quitting
i hate the way i feel inside you now
like an intruder, a thief
some pawing lecher
taking what should be given
i hate what you've done to me
and i hate what i've done to you
i hate you now
i guess there's no escaping it
i see no reason to lie or "play along"
i see that you don't either
and i see that there's only one thing left
divorce
'til death do us part
i hate the way you looked at me
when i started choking you
like i didn't have the right
your "how dare you" stare
just made me squeeze harder
and i hate the way you pist the bed
before you finally died
one more mess you made
that i'll have to clean up
i hate the way your dead body felt
as i dropped you in the trunk
and the whole way to the woods
i tried to cry, but couldn't
i couldn't squeeze one drop of remorse
from the stone you made of my heart
i hate the way i missed the game
just to bury you
i stared at your body
after i shoveled the first load of dirt onto you
and i scrambled for emotion
frantic for some type of sensation
but, i felt Nothing
Nothing at all
and i hate the way i still reach for you at night
only to find that you're not there
and the way i fall back asleep so fast
'cuz i still can't force myself to care
i'd probably hate the way i feel these days
if i still felt anything at all
and i'd probably hate you even more
because it's all your ***** fault
(i'm sure my emotions are still inside
somewhere that i can never reach
you made me lock it all inside
and i guess i buried you with the key
maybe you were the key
damn you, why did you stop loving me)
Copyright ©
Cancer
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2003-09-24 12:35:00]
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Re: i hate the way...
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by Kalika on
Wednesday, 24th September 2003 @ 02:03:46 PM AEST
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a bit scary but powerfully written.
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Re: i hate the way...
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by sicknivesevered on
Wednesday, 24th September 2003 @ 07:08:07 PM AEST
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| Wow. That was damn good. Shoved me right through the eyes of the man. |
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Re: i hate the way...
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 24th September 2003 @ 11:10:52 PM AEST
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Really very good.....can't say that I agree with the "MO"..lol...
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Re: i hate the way...
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by jaeann on
Thursday, 25th September 2003 @ 12:23:08 AM AEST
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| you actually gave me a glimpse of what love gone wrong can do to a man.........his desires to rid himself of pain........the pain she caused.....we can all be so cruel to one another........excelllent powerfully written piece.... |
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Re: i hate the way...
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by DreamWeaver on
Thursday, 25th September 2003 @ 02:46:02 AM AEST
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| You have an incredible way of expressing how people truly feel (but they just don't admit it) ... awesome write ... Jan |
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Re: i hate the way...
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by EmSal on
Friday, 26th September 2003 @ 07:52:39 AM AEST
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Wow...what more can I say...
Emma. |
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