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A Promise
Contributed by
SinfullyTwisted
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Wednesday, 24th September 2003 @ 10:35:00 AM in AEST
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Thoughts filled with beguiling whispers
Mocking laughter fades
Smoldering smiles in the dark
Fangs gnashing, talongs clawing
Deep wounds that would never heal
Tears of the blind
Mute man sings
Haunted by the endless screams
Broken hearts, forgotten promises
Sing your sweet song to me
I hear anguish in your voice
Agony not appeased by time
Soul riddled with scars
A look to freeze your heart
Burn into your eyes
Take me into you
I'll bury your pain deep inside myself
Darkness enfolds
I walk hand in hand with Death
Sing your sweet song to me
I hear sadness in your voice
Choking sobs for loves long lost
And lies unspoken
I can't save you, only reach out my hand
Trust me and I'll take you away
Wrap you in my veil of dreams
And sing you into peacefuly sleep
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SinfullyTwisted
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2003-09-24 10:35:00]
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Re: A Promise
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by Marco on
Wednesday, 24th September 2003 @ 10:51:52 PM AEST
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These's lyrics are deep and dark at the start and i have noticed that you pulled you way out of a Vampric mood from yourself. So really someone pulled you out of yourself to save yourself. It's nice. I also am a lyric's writer and i have a band that writes up new stuff to put music together. And reall to be truthfull we come up with dark and and heavy lyrics like your's. It's good to see you doing your own stuff. Keep it going hard at it all.
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Re: A Promise
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by cryingonmyporch on
Thursday, 25th September 2003 @ 10:51:22 AM AEST
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Very very nice. Enjoyed it alot hope to see more of your work on the site!
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Re: A Promise
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by jaeann on
Thursday, 25th September 2003 @ 02:39:18 PM AEST
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| i'm glad he saved you!!! |
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Re: A Promise
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 25th September 2003 @ 03:32:06 PM AEST
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Wow... this was so deep and poetic. I loved the 2nd stanza... this was great... wow
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Re: A Promise
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 12:37:14 PM AEST
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Nice write.
Quite enjoyable and interesting.
Thanks for sharing. |
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