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All about life
Contributed by
Ivy
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Wednesday, 24th September 2003 @ 07:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I wanna write all about life,
the reality that will never suffice.
So much of truth is hidden like treasure,
liars rule this worldly pleasure.
Poor and weak always suffer,
rest sleep with a velvet cover.
Some are always trying to prove there worth,
some get it without any effort.
Few try hard but get nothing,
patience is what God is testing.
In this life we have heaven and hell,
I think it is a magic spell.
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Ivy
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2003-09-24 07:05:00]
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Re: All about life
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 24th September 2003 @ 07:30:47 AM AEST
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"patience is what God is testing.
In this life we have heaven and hell"
.. good lines..nice read. venkat
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Re: All about life
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by Damien on
Wednesday, 24th September 2003 @ 09:10:46 AM AEST
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| A truely lovely poem , great going :) |
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Re: All about life
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by The_Poet on
Wednesday, 24th September 2003 @ 12:14:26 PM AEST
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| This is something so true... Life's like that. But then, yu just have to keep on doing what yu were doing.. There's a silver lining in the cloud.. ;) |
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