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Contimplating Suicide
Contributed by
poison_touch666
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Wednesday, 24th September 2003 @ 05:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I hit myself,
I hate myself,
I cut myself,
Try to destroy myself.
Wish I would wake up dead,
A pill, a knife,
A bullet through the head
I wish I could end this ruined life.
If I could swim I would drown me,
If I could drive I'ld inale carbon monoxide,
Not for my soar neck I would hang from a tree,
If I had the guts by now i would have died.
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2003-09-24 05:35:00]
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Re: Contimplating Suicide
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by Merry on
Wednesday, 24th September 2003 @ 07:11:14 AM AEST
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sounds like you're having a really bad time - maybe need someone to talk to. At times many people feel the way you do - life can be bitter sweet, but full of so many wonderful surprises. Don't give up -
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Re: Contimplating Suicide
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 24th September 2003 @ 09:44:27 AM AEST
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Well damn...This is quite a write. You express all your pain,and it is quite obvious you are here with us,still alive! :-) And you don't know why? Maybe it's to share your talent and pain with others. Maybe it's for us to understand a little more the hidden pain you feel.Whatever the reason,I would love to read more of your poems,and feel free to "pm" me any time. I can relate to your pain,and I am an open door for you,should you need it.
Angel always...godspeed...joni
{{{{{{{{{{{{{{to you}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}} |
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Re: Contimplating Suicide
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 24th September 2003 @ 09:49:37 AM AEST
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no one can tell you not to do it.... they can only ask u to please not.... although i'm a stranger to you, i ask you: plz dont take your life... write about it, if it helps u feel better... and think that maybe, one day u will be able to help someone who will feel the same way as u do now... i've got nothing better to offer, but to promise u that things have to get better... and that u're not the only one who feels the way u do, nor the only one who will survive to tell the tale! plz give yourself a few more chances!
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Re: Contimplating Suicide
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 24th September 2003 @ 11:02:28 AM AEST
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your poem will reach so many here (it is an emotionally moving piece) , those who have felt as you, those who still do. sometimes it takes more 'guts' to carry on. not so long ago, i was proud of myself if i managed to walk outside to get the mail! i hope you keep writing, keep reaching, and perhaps let someone near enough to reach you (pm me if you like).
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Re: Contimplating Suicide
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by afraid_of_fear on
Wednesday, 24th September 2003 @ 03:22:06 PM AEST
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I can totally relate to this.. And can understand where you're coming from.. If you want to talk to anyone, even just to let off steam, please feel free to PM me, and I'll be here to listen..
love and hope : )
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Re: Contimplating Suicide
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by jaeann on
Thursday, 25th September 2003 @ 12:15:31 AM AEST
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| it's not lack of guts.....more presence of strength...let it flow through your writing.... |
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Re: Contimplating Suicide
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 25th September 2003 @ 03:28:53 PM AEST
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I think at times its harder to live than to die so hang in there and life will get better... trust me.
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Re: Contimplating Suicide
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by Coquillion on
Friday, 26th September 2003 @ 02:39:40 PM AEST
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I was moved by your poem. Sometimes it takes more courage to live.
You have a talent - live for that. |
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Re: Contimplating Suicide
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by deathdrop on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 03:18:20 AM AEST
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stay strong
~don't close your~
deathdrop. |
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