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Waiting for you
Contributed by
bhav
on
Tuesday, 23rd September 2003 @ 07:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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As the sun goes down ,
as the noise leaves the town ,
as the street lights make their presence felt ,
I find it becomes difficult for me as your absence is felt .
Just in the rush of the peak hour ,
you will find me gazing right ,left and center hour by hour .
Suddenly for a spilt of a second things just seems to stop,
my eyes deceive me as I see you in front of me and my heart begins to hop .
I hear something loud in the background ,
slowly the noise comes in the foreground .
People use their vehicle horns tell me to move on ,
I can’t just move on .
I am waiting for you .
It was just yesterday when we crossed each others path ,
I was on the vehicle and you were on the peddlers path .
The moment I saw you, the moments we spent together flashed across my mind ,
you turned and passed by without even noticing me , leaving me behind .
Physically I moved on,
because I needed to move on .
Mentally , I am waiting, I am still waiting for you .
There were days when you inspired me ,
You still do ,
Every time ,everyday ,every hour, every minute and every second .
But now its just my loneliness, myself and me .
As the night makes its presence felt ,
My body says “ Sleep you need rest .”
My hearts voice is crushed by my sleep .
Everyday it says “ You miss someone and it is something which is felt ,
felt in my actions ,
felt in my talks ,
felt in my eyes .
Today I push myself to the bed ,
with you in my heart and thoughts I fall asleep in my bed .
Even in my dreams I am still searching ,still waiting ,
waiting for you .
Copyright ©
bhav
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2003-09-23 19:35:00]
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Re: Waiting for you
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by Merry on
Tuesday, 23rd September 2003 @ 10:03:52 PM AEST
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bhav - this is so sad - but I won't be the only one who says - been there done that - somehow we do move on and find life doesn't stop just because that certain person has moved on without us.
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Re: Waiting for you
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 23rd September 2003 @ 10:56:48 PM AEST
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I agree it is sad and I'm #2 2 say been there, done that!
Great writing!
PEACE, JOY, LUV,
emy
I'm still waiting too but don't have a clue who for.
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Re: Waiting for you
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 24th September 2003 @ 02:28:28 AM AEST
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This is an absolutely incredible write... shows the longing so well....
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Re: Waiting for you
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 24th September 2003 @ 11:38:46 AM AEST
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you have expressed a broken heart. so sad.
painted _echos |
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