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Love at first sight
Contributed by
wrybod
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Tuesday, 23rd September 2003 @ 04:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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''Survival of the fittest''
(the universal game)
requires that we diversify
and don't all stay the same
Our senses have been highly tuned
and thus we can depend
they'll pick out any ''opposites''
that will achieve this end
It's not a matter needing thought
the brain is not required
the senses activate direct
the ''parts'' to be ''inspired''
I don't know if you girls ''enjoy''
a similar reaction
with me it was a warship
going into action
Radar spots a target!
alerts sound clear for action
engines up to full speed
all done in a fraction.........
The magazine is fully manned
the boilers get a stoke up
guns are trained and loaded
Captain ''Brain'' is woke up
In just about ten seconds
(give or take a ''midge'')
It's full speed into action with
NO CAPTAIN ON THE BRIDGE
Copyright ©
wrybod
... [
2003-09-23 16:05:00]
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Re: Love at first sight
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 23rd September 2003 @ 04:10:58 PM AEST
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i really love this
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Re: Love at first sight
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 23rd September 2003 @ 08:38:09 PM AEST
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Lovely write, Wrybod....
Hope all is well with you..
Jenni |
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Re: Love at first sight
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by lovingcritters on
Wednesday, 24th September 2003 @ 05:33:37 AM AEST
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Hi there Wrybod,
I've heard all about you.
I really enjoyed your poem too!
Hope you'll write a homophone, 'cause Norm is waiting to see who's going to win!
If you join us....his chances might be thin!
lovingcritters
Connie Sue
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Re: Love at first sight
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by POOBEAR on
Wednesday, 24th September 2003 @ 12:16:41 PM AEST
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Hello Bob,
I like this very much and I myself can
find many meanings in this even
though you manage to express it
with your usual classiness and wittiness.
I truly love your work and I hope one day
to gather enough life experiences to write
as well as you.
Very Sincerely
Lynn
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Re: Love at first sight
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by norm on
Thursday, 25th September 2003 @ 09:53:54 PM AEST
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I have to check my batteries
To see just how they work,
Certain things about the write
make me want to lurk.
If indeed the babes are pray
to cannonade and such
Things that happened in my past
didn't help me very much.
A captain on the bridge..no way
i'd rather creep at night
It's yes or no and thanks a lot
until I'm out of sight.
Your write is great, it's not too late
for me to change my way
No candy, flowers perfume, sir
Buy hormones from ebay.
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Re: Love at first sight
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by Tanna on
Wednesday, 1st October 2003 @ 11:34:03 PM AEST
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I am VERY impressed with your work. (Not a "great" comment, I know... but I want to get back to reading your poems!)
~T |
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Re: Love at first sight
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by Merry on
Thursday, 4th December 2003 @ 11:40:32 AM AEST
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this is very cute and clever - i too saw that program lol -
merry |
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