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A new set of eyes
Contributed by
darkscorpio
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Tuesday, 23rd September 2003 @ 07:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The only sound, is what you breathe
What you take with you, is what you leave
Behind your smile, leaves a trail of tears
Bitterness grew, gray hair from passing of years
You have a brand new life before your eyes
A chance to live what you’ve learned, a chance to change the lies
That was passed to you when you were young
Cause now you have your very own son
To shape and to mold, and to help survive
In this sometimes cruel world, he can help you stay alive
Mentally and emotionally, looking through the world through a new set of eyes
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2003-09-23 07:35:00]
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Re: A new set of eyes
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by jaeann on
Tuesday, 23rd September 2003 @ 01:11:17 PM AEST
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| yes yes yes!!!! to see through their eyes...if only for a brief moment...beautiful write!!! |
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Re: A new set of eyes
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 22nd May 2004 @ 10:32:53 AM AEST
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| You caught this perception perfectly, and twisted it into a fine poem. A thoroughly refreshing read. I'm glad I came round your block, Mr. Scorpio. |
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