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An accident
Contributed by
Aika
on
Tuesday, 23rd September 2003 @ 03:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I had an accident
I killed one lil bird
I just drove
lovely country around
when suddenly
a lil bird in front of me
I could not break
I could not even stop
although I really drove slow
poor lil bird crashed my car
and fell down
I felt so bad
and still feel so sad
cos this one lil bird
will never again
will never more
sing his lovely song
will never more fly
his wings spread to the sky
I do not think about "more"
what would be "IF"..
cos the story would be very long
I just know:
we never know
how long we will live
That is why:
live every while
every moment
please , do not forget:-)
Copyright ©
Aika
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2003-09-23 03:35:00]
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Re: An accident
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 23rd September 2003 @ 07:17:28 AM AEST
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This is sweet....and good advice too...
Jenni |
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Re: An accident
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by nigelangel1 on
Tuesday, 23rd September 2003 @ 02:35:44 PM AEST
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| Beautiful Aika......you portray such feeling, and honesty.......Nig. ty ty ty |
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Re: An accident
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by lovingcritters on
Wednesday, 24th September 2003 @ 05:51:09 AM AEST
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Poor little Aika,
I'm so sorry that you have to experience that.
I read once that if a bird flies into your car, then that little bird is sick, and would not survive much longer!
I hope that will give you reason for rest.
It's so hard to kill a beautiful little creation
one of God's Best!
So now just forget, and don't blame yourself.
No one was at fault...
especially you....Aika...you would never have done that on purpose we all know!
lovingcritters]
Connie....what a 'heartfelt" poem...I loved it! |
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Re: An accident
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by jeanie on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 04:07:44 PM AEST
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| aww, trues, sad and real....this always touches me realy deep |
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