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Abrupt Conclusion
Contributed by
jaeann
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Monday, 22nd September 2003 @ 07:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Yesterday....
I was left in a pool of
innocent fears.
Today...
I am lost in an introspection
of loathsome tears.
Tomorrow....
Still so very dark
but maybe I'll be freer.
Copyright ©
jaeann
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2003-09-22 19:35:00]
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Re: Abrupt Conclusion
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by Crow on
Monday, 22nd September 2003 @ 07:39:05 PM AEST
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| you bear your soul, you make me want to come and get you, good job. Crow |
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Re: Abrupt Conclusion
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 22nd September 2003 @ 07:40:25 PM AEST
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Abrupt and to the point!
Freer and much happier are my hopes for your tomorrow! :-)
Angel always...godspeed...joni |
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Re: Abrupt Conclusion
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 22nd September 2003 @ 09:00:54 PM AEST
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i know the feeling all too well, my wishes for you in the future are those of tears of joy
Shari |
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Re: Abrupt Conclusion
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by Merry on
Monday, 22nd September 2003 @ 09:31:31 PM AEST
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everyday will get better - just keeping moving forward. This is a very stark poem - powerful in it's brevity
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Re: Abrupt Conclusion
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by lovingcritters on
Monday, 22nd September 2003 @ 11:34:46 PM AEST
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How inspirational for all of us to view
That's just what you have to do,
Is live through this day and then maybe two,
and then someday you will look back and say....did I really live through all of that? and each day you will be freer Jaymee, for with each day....you grow just little bit more....and as you do that....you heart's desire your soul's door .....opens, and one day you will say,
"I knew that!" And then you will truly be set free!
Bless your heart....I hope it's soon, but not too soon, for then you will not be completely well!
lovingcritters sending love and hugs!
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Re: Abrupt Conclusion
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 23rd September 2003 @ 09:39:43 AM AEST
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be free and happy as you deserve
michelle |
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