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Forbidden Fruit
Contributed by
darkscorpio
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Monday, 22nd September 2003 @ 01:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Forbidden fruit you are so tasty
Sudden urge a move so hasty
Giving in to my desire
Mind’s in turmoil, hearts afire
Torn between what’s right and wrong
Seduced by the sound of this lustful song
One wrong move and I’ll be dead
That’s why I’m writing what’s in my head
Heart and soul yearns, while my soul does burn
Trying to do the right thing
And if I give in, to my desire
World will implode, I’ll be on fire
And lose all that I’ve fought for, and what I believe
But through the haze of emotion, I might deceive
The one that has my heart…or at least I thought she did
Restraints are breaking, needs are calling
I never thought that I’d be falling
But what about the consequences
You’ve brought alive all of my senses
Feel like a kid, this mixed up feeling
of wanting that fruit, that’s so appealing
Copyright ©
darkscorpio
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2003-09-22 13:35:00]
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Re: Forbidden Fruit
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by incomplete on
Monday, 22nd September 2003 @ 01:52:39 PM AEST
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| Sometimes the tempting fruit can be poison, don't loose everthing for just one bite. |
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Re: Forbidden Fruit
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by jaeann on
Monday, 22nd September 2003 @ 02:24:34 PM AEST
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| a taste that lasts but a moment will take a lifetime to heal..... |
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Re: Forbidden Fruit
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by drunken_ghost on
Monday, 22nd September 2003 @ 02:40:29 PM AEST
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| wow great read, only after discovering this site poetry has become fun and not just something that you have to do at school, and i think that this poem really got me thinking thanx |
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Re: Forbidden Fruit
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 22nd September 2003 @ 04:08:57 PM AEST
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Loved this I feel the same way. I loved this.
Bobo (Joel) |
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