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My Blood
Contributed by
LovingWhispers
on
Monday, 22nd September 2003 @ 12:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Take this...read
it is my blood
shed for you in ink
my passion is gone; I gave it all
I struggle now to think
I'm the "rummy" on the corner
begging money just to eat
the silent figure standing
in the shadows off the street
the unshaven face that turns away
when people stop to gaze
a prisoner in the truest sense
having lived my finest days
No longer am I eloquent
it hurts, but that's the truth
for I borrowed from my old age
by stealing from my youth
So, take this...read
my very blood
shed here with my pen
the poet's soul...a fragile thing
can break...but never bend...
Copyright ©
LovingWhispers
... [
2003-09-22 12:05:00]
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Re: My Blood
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by Walt on
Monday, 22nd September 2003 @ 12:31:58 PM AEST
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Great write.
walt |
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Re: My Blood
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by hardcoreputa on
Monday, 22nd September 2003 @ 01:56:17 PM AEST
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| wow... thats really sdad and emotional a great poem hope to read more of your work ~Apryl |
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Re: My Blood
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by norm on
Monday, 22nd September 2003 @ 02:28:44 PM AEST
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It's good, it's great, it's plain first rate
But for the grace of God go all,
Many go high and reach the sun,
others fail and just fall...
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Re: My Blood
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by Aika on
Monday, 22nd September 2003 @ 03:25:19 PM AEST
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| very lovely poem, very sad one.. And still great poet you are !!! aika |
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Re: My Blood
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by Crow on
Monday, 22nd September 2003 @ 08:21:52 PM AEST
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| this is the first i`ve read, great write, Crow |
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Re: My Blood
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 22nd September 2003 @ 09:18:06 PM AEST
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excellent
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Re: My Blood
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 23rd September 2003 @ 05:44:26 AM AEST
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This is an excellent write, I loved it
-Stacey |
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