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I do not know how to go on
Contributed by
Aika
on
Monday, 22nd September 2003 @ 02:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I am lost somewhere in the middle of the space
do not know where to go - forward or back
please show me the way I should go
I swear I will do nothing more
that what you wish and makes you feel better
if you do not wish I will not be the hunter
I have always been honest and I meant
every word to you I have said
what was between us I keep as top secret
I would never tell anyone - you can rely upon it
Does not matter what your wish is like
only allow me to stay by your side
I do not want to cause any problems or pain
your satisfaction is the main
you came like a piece of my soul
you have entered my mind and I thought
we could share a lot together
you have touched me deeply and forever
Thanks, you gave me wonderful times
does not matter for how long and how it comes
I have experienced something special and nice
you really conjured all my smiles.
In my heart deeply and also in my mind
is that piece of you hidden, but I
have my heart bleeding for you
it is all crazy and me is blue.
Copyright ©
Aika
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2003-09-22 02:35:00]
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Re: I do not know how to go on
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by lovingcritters on
Monday, 22nd September 2003 @ 02:56:23 AM AEST
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Dear Aika,
I hope this is fictional dear. I hate to see you so troubled, so anxious, and I hope you will let me know if there is anything I can do to make you feel better.
A beautiful poem here. I enjoyed reading it, but was troubled for you!
love you,
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Re: I do not know how to go on
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 09:39:07 AM AEST
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Wonderful write aika, I can feel the sadness in your heart.A troubled soul in this one, very moving.I guess fate will always show the way.
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