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When you are sad....

Contributed by Aika on Monday, 22nd September 2003 @ 01:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

If I could I would take you to the paradise
and sit you on the cloud nine
would let you playfully shake your legs
would let you glance all the ways

Little angels would court you all the time
would pamper you and make you smile
they would bring you a piece of blue skies
would let you sing with nightingales
they would teach you to fly
to softly flatter your wings like a butterfly
your big eyes would twinkle like the stars
your sweet lips would conjure the smiles

If you needed to sleep or just a lil to rest
angels would swing you in their arms and caress
would softly kiss your eyelids till they are closed
they could be special angels of yours
I would let you spend there as long time as you wish
give you your own key to get here

If you need to smile or suddenly cry
wanna run, swing, sleep or just to fly
or stay alone or visit your friends
or go for a short trip or that one which never ends
does not matter
just do all your best to feel better

you are so special, the only one
you live your life on your own
head up and chear up , your life does not end
although every day is not the best
life is like the sun
some days are cloudy, dark and no fun
but the day of its shining beauty has to come

And with angels or sun or without
you are never lonely cos all around
wherever you look, are lots of your friends
can not you touch them? try to pass your hands..
I wish I could do more..

Copyright © Aika ... [ 2003-09-22 01:35:00]
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Re: When you are sad.... (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Monday, 22nd September 2003 @ 03:00:04 AM AEST
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How very loving, caring, and sweet! Heartfelt and with much fellow feeling Aika...What a wonderful friend she has in you. I hope she knows that Too!
love you,
Connie

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