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Weird Feeling
Contributed by
ruby1987
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Sunday, 21st September 2003 @ 07:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Today I had this weird feeling,
Mesmerized I was left kneeling,
In the sand where I’d felt all that devotion,
It was an explosion of beautiful emotion,
Together we watched the sun hide beneath the sea,
Now I know why they say, “I would die in ecstasy,”
Its such a delight that we ride upon the same bus,
Because as one we listened to the wind whistle around us
Walking home alone I felt the nearness of you,
Even though the rain had eagerly began to fall,
Wet thoroughly I was embraced by the nearness of you,
With no pain for the first time in the rain I stood tall.
Tonight as I will lay myself down to sleep,
I will dream high in the mountains of our future to be,
Now that I have this weird feeling so deep,
I speculate what kismet has in store for me.
Copyright ©
ruby1987
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2003-09-21 19:35:00]
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Re: Weird Feeling
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by desertwispers on
Sunday, 21st September 2003 @ 07:40:43 PM AEST
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beautiful images
michelle |
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Re: Weird Feeling
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by garyh on
Sunday, 21st September 2003 @ 09:29:04 PM AEST
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great write... and yes, beautiful images ;)
but i love the rythm and rhyming of this also... very unique you are right... keep writing you are very talented |
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