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fear
Contributed by
painted_echos
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Sunday, 21st September 2003 @ 03:35:00 AM in AEST
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you knew me from my soul as i laid it bare for you
and only you
now i open up, pour out my essence freely with words i leave on pages
so my soul belongs to everyone, but not to one
and only one
i can’t do that again
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Re: fear
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by Avarice_Riot on
Sunday, 21st September 2003 @ 04:02:52 AM AEST
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| Succinct. Amazing. |
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Re: fear
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 21st September 2003 @ 11:22:53 AM AEST
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Lovely.... so much said in so few words...
Jenni |
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Re: fear
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 21st September 2003 @ 12:53:55 PM AEST
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thoughts very well expressed with few words good write
Shari |
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Re: fear
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by Crow on
Sunday, 21st September 2003 @ 08:21:45 PM AEST
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| I like this, short and to the point. very good. Crow |
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Re: fear
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by venkat on
Monday, 22nd September 2003 @ 03:01:20 AM AEST
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| well done..so much meaning in very few words. |
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Re: fear
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by lovingcritters on
Monday, 22nd September 2003 @ 03:56:03 AM AEST
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I found it inspirational. Like you had learned a lesson, and would never go there again!
I think it was very upbuilding, but then I'm very positive....perhaps I missed the full meaning.
Was really a very good poem.
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Re: fear
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by jaeann on
Monday, 22nd September 2003 @ 05:06:08 AM AEST
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yes................no more!!!!
great write!!! |
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