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Burden
Contributed by
PsychoticDreamz
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Sunday, 21st September 2003 @ 01:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Too many years among friends I thought were true
Behind my back, their talk of me, They thought I never knew
Telling me how to live my life, instead of living their own
They wouldnt survive as me, They've never left their happy zone
Silencing I opinions, Saying Im ignorant to my face
Always say Im wrong on things just because I think a slower pace
I cant believe I've called them friends everyday they make it worse
Always I think it'd be much easier to riding in a hearse
Although things aren't as bad as some, Its difficult none the less
I thought I had many great friends, only to find they're not the best
I waste our time being by their sides, instead, when I should go
I live my life a burden to mostly everyone I know
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2003-09-21 01:35:00]
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Re: Burden
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by DreamWeaver on
Sunday, 21st September 2003 @ 01:56:34 AM AEST
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| This is a great poem ... I relate very well to what you say ... Jan |
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Re: Burden
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by jaeann on
Monday, 22nd September 2003 @ 05:03:07 AM AEST
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RIGHT ON!!!!! yes yes yes yes yes!!!!!
this is awesome....you tell it so very well....expressed what i've needed to express for far too long..... |
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Re: Burden
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by Tanna on
Thursday, 2nd October 2003 @ 12:15:33 AM AEST
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This is so sad :(
~T |
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