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Brilliant?

Contributed by alisialynn on Saturday, 20th September 2003 @ 11:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Brilliant are you still? Feeling, this feeling that I felt when you were kneeling
Before me?
Are you still before me?
I implore you, answer me, I’m calling you

And the walls are still empty, I could hang things but, I prefer them like me
Forever. What is that? But, a word and a word I wish I knew you more that I know me.

Still
Be still
Be still my aching heart
It’s like water
Its running
And I can’t get away
From these feelings

Sorrow. I feel so horrible. I want you near me and I hate love.

I hate tears
And I hate crime
And I hate you for not being mine
I hate these walls
And I hate this skin
And I hate my life
That you are no longer in
I hate being here alone on Friday night.
I hate being here alone when I’m not right.

Brilliant, do you still think you are? I think you’re brilliant. I think you’re absolutely crazy.

I close my eyes and I see you before me
I touch your skin, because it’s reaches for me
You’re fingers are like a compass
And my body heals from them
And I beg you now
Please don’t listen now
Close your ears
And my embarrassment is fierce
My ego weighs me down
I am drowning in this rejection.
Feel me now and I cry for your perfection.

I hate that wicked place inside me
I hate that I can still taste, that it resides
Here.
Here.
I hate it here.

Copyright Â© alisialynn ... [ 2003-09-20 23:05:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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